Feedback From Screening

Mise En Scene: Casual dressing relates to audience.
Editing: Good pace change during it, Possible cut out JJ's freeze frame/change it. Maybe use some filters
Generic conventions: Crime caper supposed to show scrumping, and theres only one apple. It is funny and very well done.
Camerawork: the stills that have been placed on the footage is good helps to focus on the character more. good variety of camera shots. Juddery camera work cut faces sometimes ruins smooth camera flow.
Sound: Sound is good fits the caper well. Extend it.

Predicted mark: Level 3 or 4